Friday, September 15, 2006

Most of this is Unimportant

It was a desolate land, to be accurate, or maybe to exaggerate the smallest bit. Because there was grass, in small square grass colonies, and there were trees that sucked the moisture from the ground. And there was death, for sure, for how could it be otherwise? But this death was neither more or less than a place less desolate. It just was, like the pebbles that roll under the weight of your foot.

There were people who lived in this desolation. They had hopes, like cognizant beings in far better locales, and they had these hopes smashed like stained glass. Constantly, a hope was being crushed, its blood trickling into the shallow water table to feed the the red-leafed trees that somehow survived. One could find dead hopes underfoot as one will notice cigarette butts on a sidewalk, the hopes' faces brown, too, like a spent cigarette filter.

Some people kept wild hopes chained in their barren backyards. On certain days you could hear the hopes' howls, and the clanging of their chains as they pulled and pulled at the stake that stopped their wanderings. Curiously, this made many chained hopes cross-eyed. The morning after a full moon would find many a hope clinging to its home stake, spun around by its marred vision and choked by its chain.

Fact: Hopes are androgynous and asexual.

One man I knew had a hope which he repeatedly buried in the dry land, only to see it dig its way out. This happens, too, when you pour sand on an ant. Watch long enough, and you will see the grains tumble and give way, maybe just a few at a time, until an antenna is peeking through back into the air. The same happened with this man's hope, until he grew tired of this sport and drowned his willful pet in his above-ground swimming pool. It sank like a skeleton key.

All of this is unimportant.

Moreso, most of this is unimportant.

What is important is: It was a desolate land.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

4 Very Important Things:

1. Anyone who uses the term "water table" in a piece of fiction is one step away from brilliant.

2. This description of the desolate place is only one half fiction and an irrationally small fraction unimportant.

3. Disgarded cigarette butts should be placed in appropriate recepticals -not dicarded on the side walk- to prevent pollution of the water table and the visual space of your fellow Americans. Cigarettes may be tossed on the ground with abandon in foreign countries (excluding Wales, which is not, strictly speaking, a country).

4. You enjoy commas. I enjoy you.